Fun and Games: Poetry & Limericks: Poetry

This Luminoscity Within Me by Miserie Rated: G Feedback are welcome and please by aware that English is not my first language. Hope you enjoy!
So unprepared I was when you lay eye on me To the feeling that filled a empty space far away into me Only then I realized that my life was a shadow only A cover to my pain, suffering and agony But now this darkness scares me I'm swimming through a raged sea And in this darkness I can't see I only have for guide this light within me This luminosity breaking the obscurity It is your eyes watching over me There is no going back unfortunately There is no need to denied or lie to me Because even now what will be really left of me? Because this real pain, suffering and agony Will be to past this life without you beside me I am going to swim for eternity Because now in this darkness I can see Because my guide now I know it is you within me This obscurity will be swallow but the luminosity No matter the weather, one day, you'll be with me
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